Writing

With Term one now into full swing, we are pretty much back into our normal programme. Here are some super snapshots of some children's writing from Miss McLeod's writing group.

Enjoy reading!

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The rugby players wait like a jaguar, waiting for the right time as the the ball speeds through the air, their arms reach high like a mountain into the blue sky.The players are reaching for the ball with persistence.As the ball gets snatch by the player in red the crowds roars with excitement. The teams channels their speed to go their fastest.As the red team charges to the goal the blue team catches up and right onto their tails.

-By Jed

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The rugby players position themselves as the ball comes hurtling towards them. The Red team catches the ball and there he goes running through the squishy mud with the ball in his hands. "oww" the crowd goes as he’s tackled straight to the ground he passes the ball as he goes down.

-By Lucas

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As the dew on the wet tree leaves drips on to the sweaty players heads, mud from the damp morning grass splatters up their tired legs. 

They can hear the cheering crowds voices echoing into the mysterious dark forest  and their yelling coachs deep voice. When they hear the mud squelch the players can hear them selves continuously puff because they are running up and down the damp playing field.

-By Sophie

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As the red team runs to their goal one of the players from the blue team tackles the player from the red team…

Now the blue team has the ball and they are heading towards the goal, he sees he is about to get tackled so he trows the ball and the red team tries to block

By Arwen

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